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Canon EOS 1000D 1/128 second F/5.6 55 mm 400 Aug 10, 2009, 12:59:18 PM Share
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I like how the end of this green stalk is going to blured with distance .
Here is some my tips for you :
nex time maybe you should try to focus more carefully ,
second you could try to brush this greeny background spaces on the background with some drakin' tool in photoshop or other photo editing program software .
Nice done !
thanks.
Anyway, on with the photo.
I personally feel that this is one of the strongest images in your gallery. The composition is simple and highly effective, with the dramatic twists and curves of the vine being intelligently accentuated by the dark background and the well-controlled depth of field. It ends up giving the piece a rhythm that is rarely seen in still life, and gives the shot a very unique character.
I should also mention that the water droplets are a nice touch, as they bring a strong sense of symmetry and balance to the piece. Though the shot, in my opinion, would stand fairly strong without them, they end up giving the picture just enough detail to hold the viewer's interest and keep them intrigued.
I could go on, but I think this will do for now. If you continue to put out work like this, you'll definately have a Daily Deviation in no time. Seriously.
Great job. ^_^
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