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Some minimal again. :)
Interesting swirling plant covered by droplets, after the rain.

Update: I've added a little bit more contrast following
*WildDragonsLuvBacon's critique.


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:iconfrayart:
First of all in the macro we take a moment to look how was focused on main object ( drops here ) . You do it in great way , could be better but it is really hard to do with this lens (55m , so i think this is main 18-55mm lens) . The quality wish to be better , in full view we can see a lot of noise around the picture.
I like how the end of this green stalk is going to blured with distance .
Here is some my tips for you :
nex time maybe you should try to focus more carefully ,
second you could try to brush this greeny background spaces on the background with some drakin' tool in photoshop or other photo editing program software .
Nice done !
thanks.
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:iconsimplyshane:
Feel special, as this is my first critique! :-P

Anyway, on with the photo.

I personally feel that this is one of the strongest images in your gallery. The composition is simple and highly effective, with the dramatic twists and curves of the vine being intelligently accentuated by the dark background and the well-controlled depth of field. It ends up giving the piece a rhythm that is rarely seen in still life, and gives the shot a very unique character.

I should also mention that the water droplets are a nice touch, as they bring a strong sense of symmetry and balance to the piece. Though the shot, in my opinion, would stand fairly strong without them, they end up giving the picture just enough detail to hold the viewer's interest and keep them intrigued.

I could go on, but I think this will do for now. If you continue to put out work like this, you'll definately have a Daily Deviation in no time. Seriously.

Great job. ^_^
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:iconfotobart:
Simply a great shot and one of the best macros I've seen here. BRAVO!
:iconyollanda:
That is just awsome :D
:iconmakitaki:
wonderful!

i love the focus, and the simplicity of the image
kinda looks like cursive writing

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Canon
Canon EOS 1000D
1/128 second
F/5.6
55 mm
400
Aug 10, 2009, 12:59:18 PM

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